How do i make this paragraph talk about web design, book trading, photography, and program downloads?

Question

Shmeeds PC's provides computer support services to both residential and small Business clients.
We specialize in laptop, or desktop repair, password recovery, virus removal, data backup, wireless networking, computer training, office email client configuration, and operating system installation.
Shmeed’s Pc started out with a very simple goal: To better serve local businesses, and regular household users, offering the most affordable and reliable computer servicing.
We have evolved into what it is today. We are responsible for featured programs such as, The Facebook Blocker (See Program downloads). And now have access to a warehouse of cell phone supplies that can be mailed straight to your door.
We are dedicated to providing our customers with peace of mind that they deserve. We provide you with up to date computer service and support, the latest program designs interested in your online life, and the best prices for cell phone accessories.

Answer 1

It can't be done if you want it to read well. In internet marketing, it's best to keep your paragraphs to 4 sentences so that people will actually read them. Also, in what you've written you keep changing tense from first person to third person, you need to pick a tense and stick with it. (We vs. Shmeeds PC's)



Another thing you might want to do is remove the word "You". "You" is an intimate, and doesn't really work in advertising unless you know exactly who your customers are. It's better to just write a description of what the company does and who it does it for.



"Shmeeds PC's provides computer support and software services to residential and small business customers. Their support services include laptop and desktop PC repair, password recovery, virus removal, data backup, wireless networking, computer training, office email client configuration, operating system installation and more. Their software services include programs like "The Facebook Blocker" and other proprietary, in-house, software designed to manage a customer's "online life". Visit Shmeeds PC's today for more information on their products and services, including their new "cell phone accessories store"."



I'd probably bold, italicize and/or link to the stuff I put in "". (If this is going online.) If I knew your word count limit, and/or if I had more paragraphs, I could give you better copy.

Answer 2

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Answer 3

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Answer 4

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